person like novel

I have the rights back to Pool Party and was just re-reading it on my e-novel, right after a Jeffrey Archer. I discovered some problems I’m now eagerly correcting, like a lot of telling as opposed to showing, gaps from here to there, and errors in logistics, like a person moving in twice and accomplishing an unrealistic amount of activity in a short period of time. I was also delighted with some of its inspired gems. Sort of like a personality: we all have our charming qualities and faults. Only thing, in a human, the shortcomings are harder to fix.


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